Moodles!!! More! What do you mean more would you have four line haiku 23
line sonnets ??this is madness flogging dead horses
Size is not everything !!!
But well here's a longering! To appease whoever
NAGGING
when he
accused her
of nagging
she whinnied
stamped her hooves
and flicked her tail
at him provocatively
then bolted
pmcmanus
q341
-----Original Message-----
From: Poetryetc: poetry and poetics [mailto:[log in to unmask]] On
Behalf Of Judy Prince
Sent: 30 October 2008 15:59
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Subject: Re: FW: Pat Snap earlyish :~:#:~:Wodensday 29th Octoberrevision
I love you, too, Partick; don't tell Janet!
You stole a word from my poem and that's SO unforgiveable.
But more important, as your editor I insist that you make this poem MORE!
MORE!
Just what kind of more do I envision? Let me see: No, that's your job as
poet. An editor only has to give orders.
Your absolutely most devoted fan who's trying to type this on 'my' Janet's
[son's wife] keyboard, the 'd', 'h', and 'n' which are missing, thanks to
the little 5 yr old buggers my grandtwins. OY.
Please reply to me soon before I take this *&%$%$ pc to a repairperson!
2008/10/30 Patrick McManus <[log in to unmask]>
> This seems better???? visions and revisions snap!!
>
> NAGGING
>
> when he
> accused her
> of nagging
> she whinnied
> stamped her hooves
> and flicked her tail
> provocatively
>
>
> pmcmanus
> q341
>
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Poetryetc: poetry and poetics [mailto:[log in to unmask]] On
> Behalf Of Patrick McManus
> Sent: 28 October 2008 20:29
> To: [log in to unmask]
> Subject: Pat Snap earlyish :~:#:~:Wodensday 29th October
>
> NAGGING
>
> when he
> accused her
> of nagging
> she whinnied
> stamped her hooves
> and flicked her tail
> at him provocatively
>
>
> pmcmanus
> q341
> early -off to see grandorts in the morning
> have got old computer going again -new one downloaded nearly 6000 emails
> then died - didn't have this problems in caves Mammoth clubs you could
> rely
> on and a good old flint slashers did wonders -but those cavewomen chasing
> one with heavy clubs were a bit much
> P shattered
>
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