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From: "Christopher C Jones" <[log in to unmask]>
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Sent: Wednesday, September 24, 2008 4:22 AM
Subject: Re: "The Wrong Hands"
It has been great reading these poems so many thanks for posting. Not
sure about the last two lines, but happy to hear why they are needed.
(In other words, not confident about my editorial comments but it seems
the last two lines could go and the poem still works.)
Thanks Max, Patrick, Christopher! ! I will have to rethink the ending.
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