very interesting indeed, juxtaposition taken to great heights!
these lines were most reminiscent of Cummings to me:
rain (dark) gray (late)
stern (steep) round (heap)
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2008/9/11 Sheila Murphy <[log in to unmask]>
> lob (puck) club (luck)
> cell (shade) gray (raid)
> due (north) rue (day)
> light (rum) pared (some)
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> stippled (blade) remanded (lave)
> radicchio (sate) commingled (fate)
> rain (dark) gray (late)
> peace (fall) raw (leaves)
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> border (sieve) crops (live)
> torn (each) note (bleach)
> stern (steep) round (heap)
> singing (out) sand (lout)
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> time (wine) lark (full)
> worn (play) out (tray)
> sore (gem) long (hem)
> stray (log) white (grog)
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