Thanks, Doug. I think the beginning needs - something. A big change
but I don't know to what.
I'll look it again the day after the day after ... Andrew
2008/8/15 Douglas Barbour <[log in to unmask]>:
> loved this couplet, Andrew
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> & the finish...
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> (memory-work, again).
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> Doug
> On 15-Aug-08, at 12:40 AM, andrew burke wrote:
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>> charisma would float and swim
>> in the projected narrative stream.
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> Douglas Barbour
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> http://www.ualberta.ca/~dbarbour/
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> Latest books:
> Continuations (with Sheila E Murphy)
> http://www.uap.ualberta.ca/UAP.asp?LID=41&bookID=664
> Wednesdays'
> http://abovegroundpress.blogspot.com/2008/03/new-from-aboveground-press_10.html
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> A little planet blues, for the
> deathwatch.
> A season of rictus riffs.
>
> Dennis Lee
>
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Andrew
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