Thanks barry, it was just a frustrated snap, & I tend to want to
eschew the apostrophe if i can).
Didnt even notice that it was 14 lines!
Doug
On 7-Aug-08, at 7:49 AM, Barry Alpert wrote:
> I'm admiring the enactment of temporal delay surrounding the turn of
> the sonnet in line
> 6, but can't decide whether the opening s of the 14th line works or
> if 's would be
> preferable.
>
> Barry
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