That tone's just right, born of the rhythm & syntax.
Andrew
On 23/04/2008, Douglas Barbour <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
>
> let snow blow
> wind whip white
> throughout the night
>
> come morning
> someone has to shovel
>
> (April 21 2008)
> /
> (BTW, it finally stopped snowing yesterday, but the heavy shoveling went
> on)
>
> Douglas Barbour
> [log in to unmask]
>
> http://www.ualberta.ca/~dbarbour/
>
> Latest books:
> Continuations (with Sheila E Murphy)
> http://www.uap.ualberta.ca/UAP.asp?LID=41&bookID=664
> Wednesdays'
>
> http://abovegroundpress.blogspot.com/2008/03/new-from-aboveground-press_10.html
>
> A little planet blues, for the
> deathwatch.
> A season of rictus riffs.
>
> Dennis Lee
>
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Andrew
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