I like it, Doug, but am tempted to rewriote the last line:
heavy white gouges
against a whitewashed sky
On 09/04/2008, Douglas Barbour <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> new snow
> fell slow
> all night long
>
> city swathed in white
> streets wet brown ribbons
>
> trees sharp woodcuts
> heavy white gouges against whited sky
>
> Edmonton 05 IV 08
> Douglas Barbour
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> http://abovegroundpress.blogspot.com/2008/03/new-from-aboveground-press_10.html
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> A little planet blues, for the
> deathwatch.
> A season of rictus riffs.
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> Dennis Lee
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