Ha, Andrew. I had 'whitewashed' in that last line, but before the
gouges insisted on being there (as I thought more about what a woodcut
actually is).
I'll think on it...
Doug
On 9-Apr-08, at 10:36 PM, andrew burke wrote:
> I like it, Doug, but am tempted to rewriote the last line:
>
> heavy white gouges
> against a whitewashed sky
>
> On 09/04/2008, Douglas Barbour <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
>> new snow
>> fell slow
>> all night long
>>
>> city swathed in white
>> streets wet brown ribbons
>>
>> trees sharp woodcuts
>> heavy white gouges against whited sky
>>
>> Edmonton 05 IV 08
>> Douglas Barbour
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>> http://abovegroundpress.blogspot.com/2008/03/new-from-aboveground-press_10.html
>>
>> A little planet blues, for the
>> deathwatch.
>> A season of rictus riffs.
>>
>> Dennis Lee
>>
>
>
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> Andrew
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Douglas Barbour
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Latest books:
Continuations (with Sheila E Murphy)
http://www.uap.ualberta.ca/UAP.asp?LID=41&bookID=664
Wednesdays'
http://abovegroundpress.blogspot.com/2008/03/new-from-aboveground-press_10.html
A little planet blues, for the
deathwatch.
A season of rictus riffs.
Dennis Lee
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