When somebody
> > else walks in
> >
> > the
> > dark bar
> >
> > isolates
> > liberates some
> >
> > laughter
> > an expense
> >
> > "liquid love
> > frozen kidney"
> >
> > stupid dream disappear
> > load up the night
> > ride the whale
> > slippery did
> >
> > my God
> > alight heart
> > heavy measures,
Yes, Andrew, I have ambivalences about the quote, or
whether it should be in italics. I was trying to figure
a way to draw attention to it's 'stupid dream' nature
(next line) as gratuituous language, the way a mind gets
diverted from 'essences' into stupid chatter while sitting
in meditation or, alternatively, in the
process of constructing a poem!
Thanks for 'paying attention'!
Stephen V
http://stephenvincent.net/blog/
andrew burke <[log in to unmask]> wrote: I like but wonder if the quote is a 'real' quote or inserted dialogue? (But,
maybe it doesn't matter either way ...)
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