I like but wonder if the quote is a 'real' quote or inserted dialogue? (But,
maybe it doesn't matter either way ...)
I like 'alight' a lot.
Andrew
On 07/03/2008, kasper salonen <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
>
> this is lovely in its nonchalant language; Cummings does come to mind,
> but WCW very vividly with the last stanza. in rhythm mainly, but he
> spoke so often of measures & tones & 'great figures' -- in as well as
> out of his poetry.
>
> "isolates / liberates some" is quite a beautiful way of describing a
> change of atmosphere.
>
> KS
>
> On 05/03/2008, Stephen Vincent <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> > When somebody
> > else walks in
> >
> > the
> > dark bar
> >
> > isolates
> > liberates some
> >
> > laughter
> > an expense
> >
> > "liquid love
> > frozen kidney"
> >
> > stupid dream disappear
> > load up the night
> > ride the whale
> > slippery did
> >
> > my God
> > alight heart
> > heavy measures,
> >
> >
> > Stephen Vincent
> > http://stephenvincent.net/blog/
> >
> >
>
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Andrew
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