Ha. The questions move away from mimesis into the mind perceiving/
constructing.
I felt you could cut the third line (the 'mine' is implicit) to 'More
like a cactus...'?
Doug
On 5-Mar-08, at 3:12 PM, Tina Bass wrote:
> Frost
>
> I've got a tree,
> but it's not a very good one.
>
> Mine is like a cactus...
>
> Where does it go after here?
> Will it melt?
>
> Will it really go away?
>
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> Error message?
>
> Tone continues...
> Time expires
>
Douglas Barbour
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