Yes. To make it a viable poem, I must work on it.
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On 06/03/2008, Douglas Barbour <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
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> It's a neat shuffling dance of a trip, Andrew, but I was caught off
> guard by 'pitched passed grief / days' maybe because I heard 'past'
> but more because the 'grief' seemed to emerge out of nowhere...
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> Doug
> On 4-Mar-08, at 10:13 PM, andrew burke wrote:
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> > shuffling yours and hours
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> Douglas Barbour
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> http://www.ualberta.ca/~dbarbour/
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> Latest book: Continuations (with Sheila E Murphy)
> http://www.uap.ualberta.ca/UAP.asp?LID=41&bookID=664
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> Stars, rain, forests.
> Stars rain forests.
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> John Newlove
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Andrew
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