I really like 'vortexes' & 'soirees out', Peter. And the notation of
noting by eye. I wonder if the final couplet (I know it says something
important but) can be assumed to be more or less implied, so that the
couplet before it comes in so strongly as pure image...
Doug
On 4-Mar-08, at 8:52 PM, Peter Ciccariello wrote:
> *Important *
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