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From: "Douglas Barbour" <[log in to unmask]>
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Sent: Thursday, March 20, 2008 10:40 AM
Subject: Re: "Being and Time"
Very fine, Fred. The shifts of mood & tale.
I was really taken in by 1, as the SF vision I expect from you, but
then....
Loved the way you got to:
For reason
can only triumph by a miracle.
& then
everyone feels
at times he’s in a painting, film, or novel;
then time moves on and you’re not.
It’s strange that no one thinks he’s part of a poem.
& how it all does lead inevitably to that poisoned arrow....
Doug
Doug - thanks -- glad you liked it!
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