I like where it seems to be going, Tina, but I'd edit either 'growing-
knowing' or 'relations, organisation,', as together they seem to sway
away into abstraction from that 'body'...
Doug
On 29-Feb-08, at 12:52 PM, Tina Bass wrote:
> I wrote this today. Comments are welcome.
>
>
> 5.2
>
> trembling from rest
> heart. thrum. feeling
> body growing-knowing...
> relations, organisation,
> societies inconstant
> flux; as it is with the earth
> beneath waves
> tectonic grind against
>
> man-made constructs
> reduce to less than a heap of dust
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>
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