very completely abstract, hard to handle (as in *grasp* the handle). I
love "Why did the singing stop, and why??", pretty thinkable
repetition there. this also has an interesting tang for me since I
just reread D. Thomas' "Ballad of the Long-Legged Bait" a few times
yesterday.
interesting detachment though. almost like the sea, the same & yet
different no matter where/when you look at it.
KS
On 20/02/2008, Larissa Shmailo <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
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