hmm, don't know whether I like this or not. Seems a bit, well, clean and
careful, flat and arid!
I don't know why Euclid is mentioned (possibly to fill out the rhythm?) --
it seems to me that "reduced / to lines and angles" would say the same
thing.
Janet
On 12/12/2007, Martin Dolan <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
>
> The cards sidle in, singly,
> in pairs - restrained, official
> bonhomie in approved form
> the clean and careful noting
> of a generic season.
>
> See here a star, any star
> and here a fir tree reduced
> to lines and angles, to Euclid.
> This latest shows a landscape
> unpeopled, temperate.
>
> There is the pile for sending,
> flat and arid as the rest
> designed to avoid offence.
> Now hand and pen vacillate
> over a personal touch.
>
> Canberra, 12 December
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