truly a photo shot, Kasper, but, as this excerpt demonstrates, I think
it works best when the camera eye is most (apparently; there is the
comment here) objective. although the I's sore back & all are important
to the writer, they seem to belong to a different poem.
Doug
On 17-Oct-07, at 9:51 AM, kasper salonen wrote:
> 3 magpies like cats
> killed & sent back
> as birds circle
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Latest book: Continuations (with Sheila E Murphy)
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and this is 'life' and we owe at least this much
contemplation to our western fact: to Rise,
Decline, Fall, to futility and larks,
to the bright crustaceans of the oversky.
Phyllis Webb
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