Good points, well taken, Fred. Re talk radio AM America, oh how
frighteningly right you are about how they are.
----- Original Message -----
From: "Frederick Pollack" <[log in to unmask]>
To: <[log in to unmask]>
Sent: Wednesday, October 24, 2007 9:48 PM
Subject: Re: Ceremonious
> This is closely-observed and has a weird off-kilter charm - the way it
> blends the voices of the aggrieved bureaucrat and the victimized client.
> I don't know if you need the last stanza; it seems to change the tone,
> belong almost to a different poem. One other suggestion: for end of 3rd
> stanza, "who look like clubs." Nice!
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