changed type?
KS
On 18/10/2007, Douglas Barbour <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> What I don't understand is how Kasper's two poems, which changed type
> halfway through, got through, but my reply didn't.
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> Ah well: Iif at first...
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> Doug
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> > From: Douglas Barbour <[log in to unmask]>
> > Date: October 18, 2007 9:58:50 AM MDT
> > To: "Poetryetc: poetry and poetics" <[log in to unmask]>
> > Subject: Re: snap - phonology
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> > i like the way it opens, Kasper.
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> > i wonder if i too often want action where the writer might want a more
> > static situation, but the drumming & tapping seem to be active, so I'd
> > maybe try to get it even more so?
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> > Doug
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> > On 17-Oct-07, at 2:36 PM, kasper salonen wrote:
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> >> in the phonology of the leaf
> >> the leaf as hidedrum
> >> drums itself with whispers.
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> >> unloosed from a water cycle
> >> water haunts it with an errant love
> >> & a million sticks¯
> >> rain a prankster cloud
> >> tapps you on the shoulder,
> >> just a leaf's bright ghost playing tricks.
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> >> raising the recent dead
> >> into autumn
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> >> KS
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> > Douglas Barbour
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> > and this is 'life' and we owe at least this much
> > contemplation to our western fact: to Rise,
> > Decline, Fall, to futility and larks,
> > to the bright crustaceans of the oversky.
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> > Phyllis Webb
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> Douglas Barbour
> 11655 - 72 Avenue NW
> Edmonton Ab T6G 0B9
> (780) 436 3320
> http://www.ualberta.ca/~dbarbour/
>
> Latest book: Continuations (with Sheila E Murphy)
> http://www.uap.ualberta.ca/UAP.asp?LID=41&bookID=664
>
> and this is 'life' and we owe at least this much
> contemplation to our western fact: to Rise,
> Decline, Fall, to futility and larks,
> to the bright crustaceans of the oversky.
>
> Phyllis Webb
>
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