Part of what's it's really about now is what all art needs to be about
-- a little bit about itself. It's about the taste and texture of words,
and the experience of pushing them areund a page.
Everyone's got their own ideas of how to revise a poem, and Joe Duemer's
are some of the best.
I'd try taking all punctuation out, and see how that feels to you.
Lynda Nash wrote:
> Thanks. Feels better to me too. Now it's really about something. I might
> get the hang of this poetry thing yet!
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> Lynda
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Tad Richards
http://www.opus40.org/tadrichards/
http://opusforty.blogspot.com/
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