Don't drop "aloof," whatever you do!
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µ¸? Barbour <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> And gracias to you, too, Sheila.
>
> Maybe I drop 'impervious' & keep 'aloof'? (because I
> do take Fred's
> point).
>
> It was the quickly seen, so I guess definitely
> 'snapped'....
>
> Doug
> On 28-Jun-07, at 4:23 PM, Sheila Murphy wrote:
>
> > Doug, the colors in this piece are so real and
> evocative. The
> > consonants do
> > a beautiful job of housing the vowels, a
> phenomenon consistent with the
> > subjects. And the pairing of vowel sounds as in
> 'mother . . . hover" is
> > choice.
> >
> > The crafting of 'male's aloof white head' is fine
> - wow - what a
> > stanza that
> > is, and that part of the poem leads itself back
> into life, real life,
> > continuing and moving.
> >
> > Gracias - a beauty!
> >
> > Sheila
> Douglas Barbour
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>
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>
>
> God be with you, my dears. You keep
> the old bugger. I shan't be needing him!
>
> Norman Douglas (last words)
>
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