I've never liked the method where the poem's title is also in the
poem, kindof over-egging it a bit. Just a personal preference.
On 6/20/07, Caleb Cluff <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> The ice pooled
> on the table
> as though offence
> had given mouth
> to some vulgar thought
> now resounding
> slipping sideways
> leaking a nervous hum
> a lopsided leer
> looking to slide
> from the sheets
> melt into night
>
>
> Caleb Cluff
> Majorca, VIC. 20/8
>
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