It is a great poem and I admire your (Kasper) incredible capacity in
answering each and every one in a perfect way,
On 5/16/07, kasper salonen <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
>
> it is; I thought you were saying "enough with the positive comments
> already!" haha.
> confusion averted
>
> KS
>
> On 16/05/07, Anny Ballardini <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> > I agree with the positive comments, hope this is more comprehensible, ?
> >
> > On 5/16/07, kasper salonen <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> > >
> > > ??
> > >
> > > On 16/05/07, Anny Ballardini <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> > > > Ok with the positive comments
> > > >
> > > > On 5/16/07, kasper salonen <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> > > > >
> > > > > this is outstanding. lush, & outstanding.
> > > > >
> > > > > KS
> > > > >
> > > > > On 16/05/07, Caleb Cluff <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> > > > > > My earthen bride
> > > > > >
> > > > > > whose lovers sink their blackstick fingers
> > > > > >
> > > > > > whose thighs gutter the sailing world
> > > > > >
> > > > > > whose mouth strains the air of impurity
> > > > > >
> > > > > > whose whims are silk-quartz unbound from clay
> > > > > >
> > > > > > dendrites of gold and of moss marking their surface
> > > > > >
> > > > > > whose ankles strain above the piazza loreto cobbles
> > > > > >
> > > > > > whose mouth is smooth agate, and births onyx
> > > > > >
> > > > > > whose fingers are rosemary and blood
> > > > > >
> > > > > > whose vision coloured and colourless as mirth
> > > > > >
> > > > > > gags our lies half-spoken, our helpless, virtuous lies,
> > > > > >
> > > > > > our lies meaning well, or meaning ill:
> > > > > >
> > > > > >
> > > > > > I search, I am searching for you, at dawn at dusk
> > > > > >
> > > > > > among the thrusting mushrooms, in the wet grasses
> > > > > >
> > > > > > along the sandy courses, the shilling-edged ravines
> > > > > >
> > > > > > through the prickly acacia, the boxthorn and rose-apple
> > > > > >
> > > > > > among the grey horses, the black and the bay
> > > > > >
> > > > > > along their steaming flanks, avoiding the carnelian eye
> > > > > >
> > > > > > seeking to touch your forehead with my partisan thumbs
> > > > > >
> > > > > > though I am worn thin, the sun moving steadily from me
> > > > > >
> > > > > > and sweetness becoming the vaguer emotion...
> > > > > >
> > > > > >
> > > > > >
> > > > > >
> > > > > >
> > > > > >
> > > > > >
> > > > >
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