Did you mean formally, or the kind of thinking it enters into, Tad?
Because it is such a thought-full piece, the long prose lines seem
fitting, & the slow but consistent movement works for me.
Fascinating, indeed to let a photo-shoot become a meditation on
mortality....
Doug
On 27-May-07, at 1:11 PM, TheOldMole wrote:
> Anyway, here's the poem. It's not at all like what I normally write.
>
> DAN McCORMACK PHOTOGRAPHS LEAH, NUDE, OPUS 40, MAY 2007
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Of palaeopresence. The extra
space around what is.
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