Thanks. I know it needs work. And if I don't start working on it fast,
it'll start to harden and turn into raku, and then I'll be stuck with it.
Janet Jackson wrote:
> this is one of the better villanelles I've read
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> Janet
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>> USED BY PERMISSION
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> Janet Jackson <[log in to unmask]>
> Poems at Proximity: www dot proximity dot webhop dot net
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> Our humanity is diminished when we have no mission
> bigger than ourselves.
> Bono
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Tad Richards
http://www.opus40.org/tadrichards/
http://opusforty.blogspot.com/
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