Can we expect this third iteration to be it, for the moment, Roger?
I was about to say something about the first one, as the others
appeared....
Which is to say I don't quite get all of it, but I did follow along,
enjoying the turns, the twists, the very short line breaks (cf Kasper
on that: it is something that does mean to me, rhythm, movement).
And the addition of
>> undertow
>> monochrome
>> disjoint
moves it further, along, out.... Useful to the ppem , in other words...
Doug
On 26-Apr-07, at 8:10 AM, Roger Day wrote:
> On 4/26/07, Roger Day <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
>> On 4/26/07, Roger Day <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
>> > this morning's morning
>> > certain certain
>> > warrior
>> > lithium containment vice
>> > vice
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