All three postings of the poem look the same in my mailer.
But as for the poem, it's not working for me. I think
if you're going to try this kind of thing nowadays it
either needs to be tongue-in-cheek ('brang' suggests
that it might be, but the rest doesn't, unless I'm missing something) --
or if you're going to be serious you'd have to do it EXTREMELY well.
I doubt there'd be more than a couple of people on this list
who could carry it off (and I'm not one of them).
Janet
> By sevens they fall, the words of the kings
> There Chaucer thru Troilus brang forth royal rime
(etc)
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Janet Jackson <[log in to unmask]>
Poems at Proximity:
http://www.proximity.webhop.net
The choice is between nonviolence and nonexistence.
Martin Luther King Jr.
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