Oh, my -- quite a discussion off this bit.
I fear I'm with Kasper on this -- it does seem flat to me, and I should
probably have just written another 'it's possible to be too tired' piece.
For those who don't know -- women's clinics in the States usually offer
abortions, and thus are targets of zealots, as this one was.
The poem, sadly, may be a victim of sacrificing truth for fact.
I like this discussion about critiques, though -- very much.
On 2/16/07, Douglas Barbour <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
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