Oh I don't know Janet. I found the early stanzas a bit slow going, the
sentences a bit too sentencey, but I rather enjoyed those final few
lines....
Doug
On 13-Feb-07, at 7:01 AM, Janet Jackson wrote:
> Nearly Wednesday.
> The poor woman can't
> just sleep out on the street
> in old clothes, the way poets do.
>
> A first draft by Janet Jackson
> Tue Feb 13 22:45:19 WST 2007
>
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it is an accumulation
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