Both your snaps worked in very different ways, Kasper. I even liked
'concussioned' although 'concussed' is 'correct'.
I wasn't sure of the continuing "I' but I'm not sure there's any way to
let it go....
The only thing you can do at 19 is keep reading; hell we still need to
at much later ages....
Doug
BTW: given the title of the string, The Diamond Age, did it begin with
any reference to Neal Stephenson's fine novel?
On 1-Nov-06, at 4:52 PM, kasper salonen wrote:
> 1
> without a handle the moon is a shade
> for a candle interrupting space.
> it burns like a glass fan.
>
> 2
> the wind is a desperate traveler
> begging with monster hands
> to get in
>
> KS
>
>
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