On 9/6/06, Kasper <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> interesting, I enjoyed this. first stanza is the most approachable,
> the rest are obscure to me but that doesn't lessen the quality much.
> :)
>
> KS
Cheers. One glass of wine too many last night. It makes more sense
with the following corrections:
> On 06/09/06, Roger Day <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> > I
> >
> > I suggest going to the lake to listen to the band
> > You say the sky is grey, the ground is damp, the music flat
> > I want to go sketching
> > It's all so dull round here, you say, what's the profit in a few fields and a tree?
> > I'd like to swim in a hooker's green saxophone
> > You tell no one in particular the full english breakfast looks good
> > Fuck off, I reply
> >
> > II
> >
> > in footprints tense the future
> > verbs acetylene idiocy
> > paranormal dustbins
> > serve as whore around the head
> > finger point blazing
> > oh fantastic quarter
> > forehead grinding
> > rendered adjectival fugitives
> > tomorrow, Lodz
> > razorblade complement
> > medium cool cold
> > splattered 4x4
> > hung arcane weaponry
> > a youth spent listless
> > in dank bus shelters
> > never the arrival of any bus
> > let alone the right one
> > anyway, no no how
> > a high temperature cut
> > or
> > a blunt stanley knife?
> > you decide
> >
> > II
> > fucking cliques
> > fucking cambridge
> >
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