Excellent idea.
Thank you
T
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From: "andrew burke" <[log in to unmask]>
To: <[log in to unmask]>
Sent: Sunday, August 20, 2006 2:36 AM
Subject: Re: not a haiku
> Tina - just a suggestion: if you know that some ignoramuses are gunna
> class
> it as a 'haiku' in this three-line shape, why not break the last line
> after
> 'make' and end with 'a good cut' ? It's an okay line, and emphasises the
> point nicely.
>
> Andrew
>
>
> On 20/08/06, Tina Bass <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
>>
>> Animosity toward Irish Stew
>>
>> It's not the potatoes
>> but sharp bone-pieces:
>> chops don't make a good cut
>>
>>
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