I like it very much, the language jostles on & is very crisp despite
its breathlessness. great imagery, & the ending is adept -- mushy done
WELL. very well.
dancer --> dance?
K S
On 16/08/06, Tina Bass <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> Dark Flower
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> memories dancer
> beneath your surface
> accelerating
> noise
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> I can barely stand
> for lying
> concentrated
> flesh hot-chilled
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> impossibly
> light fresh-cut
> passages
> hand. eye. brain
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> holding you
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> bringing you back
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