Caleb -very moving
I even agree with th Finn about last line being too thick -is undiscovered
right there ??
Cheers non critic P
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poetics [mailto:[log in to unmask]] On Behalf Of Tina Bass
Sent: 30 August 2006 17:53
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Subject: Re: Snap - Dog smoking
Caleb,
I liked this too. It is very elegant.
Tina
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From: "Caleb Cluff" <[log in to unmask]>
To: <[log in to unmask]>
Sent: Tuesday, August 29, 2006 12:57 PM
Subject: Snap - Dog smoking
Dog smoking
When this day is gone I shall
put my face against something cool, perhaps some tin
shed out of the light, and not think. I shall
roll my cheeks against it, or the back of my head, and
let the zinc etch its mottle standard and mend me, while
I smoke.
Open my mouth, inhale nebulae and expel dust, just to see it
unrolling its blanket tongue
on the undiscovered mattress of dark.
Caleb Cluff
Majorca, Vic.
29/08/06
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