We'll talk...
-----Original Message-----
From: Poetryetc provides a venue for a dialogue relating to poetry and
poetics [mailto:[log in to unmask]] On Behalf Of Kasper
Sent: Thursday, 31 August 2006 3:56 PM
To: [log in to unmask]
Subject: Re: Snap - Dog smoking
that's the way it always seems to be. in fact, for me every time I
receive critique on a poem of mine, everything in the comments is
already known to me, whether consciously or very consciously; I just
seem to need someone to voice those points before I can do anything
about it! not a very good strategy (well not a strategy at all), I
should maybe work on that.
K S
On 30/08/06, Caleb Cluff <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> Damn you Kasper, I write something, get all smug with it, and then you
> make me look at it properly. You're right, of course, but I just
> couldn't give those lines away. They arrived after I was well inside
> the poem, subconscious, and I could SEE it. Which doesn't mean they
> need to be there though. The usual obstacle.
>
> c
>
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Poetryetc provides a venue for a dialogue relating to poetry and
> poetics [mailto:[log in to unmask]] On Behalf Of Kasper
> Sent: Wednesday, 30 August 2006 8:49 AM
> To: [log in to unmask]
> Subject: Re: Snap - Dog smoking
>
> well hell, that was one fine experience of a poem.
> excellent writing.
> but the final bedclothes-image takes it a little too far for my
> liking, it's too overt especially after the cool/relaxed/minimal
> symbolism of the rest. first 2 (3?) stanzas are among the finest I can
> remember reading for a long while.
>
>
>
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