Or go further??
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From: Poetryetc provides a venue for a dialogue relating to poetry and
poetics [mailto:[log in to unmask]] On Behalf Of andrew burke
Sent: 24 August 2006 23:47
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Subject: Re: haiku
Kasper - nice one. How about dropping 'from'? cheers P uncka P off to jog
(very slowly doc says exercise! and apparently sex is not enough:-(
moon in tree
drops
branch to branch
any more cuts anyone??:-)
And above your poem on my gmail service came the title of an article to
read, seemingly related by some machine somewhere: Tree Risk Assessment.
'Identify Hazard before Damage Occurs' ... You've gotta watch those Moons,
they'll go around beating up defenceless trees in any neighbourhood.
Andrew
On 25/08/06, Kasper <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
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Andrew
http://hispirits.blogspot.com/
http://www.bam.com.au/andrew
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