It seems to be seduction poem week. This one is good in itself and an
interesting recap (if I'm not reading this into it unjustifiably) of
some of the recent topics in this group, which I suppose is why it's a
snap. I think it can stand by itself as a poem, though, and doesn't
need any changes.
On 5/10/06, Janet Jackson <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> black strings
>
> his perfect speech
> stripped to the waist
> his exquisite phrases
> jeans tight and damp
> his grammar
> curls cling to his chest in a lick of new sweat
> his diction
> hair hangs black strings into his eyes
> his pronunciation
> steam fizzing off him
> resonant vowels, sibilant consonants
> touch me, touch me, touch me
>
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> a draft by Janet Jackson
> Wed May 10 23:53:21 WST 2006
>
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