I usually like yours Stephen, but this doesn't really do it for me.
I can't get enough of a connection between the bits (which is
what it takes for me to get into this kind of poetry).
Janet
> Tenderly #13 or The Gertrude Improvs:
>
> Yugoslavia is not up nor
>
> An arrangement called "saucers"
(etc)
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Poems at Proximity:
http://www.arach.net.au/~huxtable/janet/proximity.html
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