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From: "Jon Corelis" <[log in to unmask]>
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Sent: Thursday, January 12, 2006 4:25 AM
Subject: Re: Muse
Some may find this poem obvious, conventional, and banal. If you're
one of them, it means your imagination has died.<
Only because, the last line apart, it is obvious, conventional and banal.
Compare, say, Chaucer's delightful 'Merciles Beaute: A Triple Roundel', for
an imaginative treatment of the love theme.
I'll post it later on when I've time.
Best
Dave
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