It looks terrific, Chris & Alison.
I am wondering if you intend to publish it, say, in a book sometime,
with the photos there where they are on the screen. As also the large
spacings in some lines. Or am I more 'correct' to take it as
essentially a prose poem, but with separate sections/lines? However it
goes, it is powerful.
On 7-May-05, at 1:49 PM, [log in to unmask] wrote:
> Hi All--
> Just a note to let you know that I have begun a feature of Alison's
> poetry at Texfiles, and each day or so will be posting a new poem of
> Alison's over the span of a couple of weeks.
> Hope Y'all enjoy.
> Best Wishes,
> Chris Murray
> http://e-po. blogspot.com
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