> Some have said that the two sections are too different, don't work
together,
> and I need to insert some sort of linking passage.
I disagree. Number I. sets up your personal space and number II. the public
space. If anything the dialogue is open ended, could continue, be
booklength?
> (Note: the "I" is Roman numeral one, i.e. part 1 - not the word "I".
> How would one make that clear to a publisher?)
Perhaps as I did, with a period following the roman numeral. An alternative
is to use 1., 2., etc, but I that may or may not work for you.
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