I like this much better, Deborah, sharper, & the lines cut faster.
Doug
On 14-Dec-05, at 5:53 PM, deborah russell wrote:
> Dear Sharon,
>
> Thanks, I've done another (yet another) edit...
>
>
> A Far-Off Whistling
>
> This passing moon
> breaks the night
> like a breath only I can feel
>
> Another windy night amplifies
> a far-off whistling, sounds -
> (something like Arabic music)
>
> Like unknown wings in flight
> hesitation stutters, profound
> with wild and white blossoms
>
> I'm sure, for someone . . .
> I feel the dark night's
> stark embrace
> and nothing more
>
> Deborah Russell, © 2005
>
>
Douglas Barbour
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My roof was once firm
yet now it cannot even
keep the stars out.
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