With Max, let me too welcome you back Douglas. Yours was the first
piece I found when I reconnected after being away for a couple of weeks
in Poland. I tend to agree with Max's comments; liked the shifts, but
felt a little editing down wouldn't hurt. Keep at it, though, & stay
around.
Doug
Douglas Barbour
11655 - 72 Avenue NW
Edmonton Ab T6G 0B9
(780) 436 3320
All day long the heart’s
dark bud unfurls
coils for its quick season
-- How could I forget
you, Heart?
Diana Hartog
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