Jon:
> > For reasons I can't explain it occurs to me that this could be titled,
> > "You can't cheat life."
Me:
> Eh? Please *try* to explain
Jon:
> That offhand comment just came to me as I was typing, so I wouldn't make
> too much of it. Maybe it's because the poem seems to be urging engagement
> on someone reluctant to engage.
Ah. Now it makes sense.
And you know, that's something I hadn't seen in the poem.
Thanks!
When I read the first draft of this at my workshop group,
people actually said, "oh wow". It seemed to touch a nerve.
So I have to try and finish the thing.
Janet
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Poems at Proximity:
http://www.arach.net.au/~huxtable/janet/proximity.html
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