Doug wrote:
>>I mean I found the sameness of linelength telling by the end<<
Telling in what way? The poem is intentionally in a pretty strict blank
verse, though I have done this before and found myself breaking the meter
and the lines as I revise. This one, though, I may try to preserve in form.
I don't know. I just finished the whole piece and so I've put it aside so
that I can go back to it with fresh ears and eyes in a week or so.
Thanks,
Richard
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