Not sure the strategy would always work, Audrey, but here I think it made
for a much stronger poem.
Both homages, yours & Hal's, were powerful evocations of precisely that
desire to recall...
doug
Douglas Barbour
Department of English
University of Alberta
Edmonton Alberta Canada T6G 2E5
(h) [780] 436 3320 (b) [780] 492 0521
http://www.ualberta.ca/~dbarbour/dbhome.htm
We deserve overtime
for dealing daily with these mistreated burdens.
Clark Coolidge
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