Dennis,
To be truthful, if you presented this to me, I'd fall asleep, it's abysmal.
too long
too much text
illegible
no diagrams
background confusing
content
Marks out of ten - one (that's being generous).
If I were you I'd revise this.
Regards
John
-----Original Message-----
From: Dennis Raphael [mailto:[log in to unmask]]
Sent: 07 April 2002 12:56
To: [log in to unmask]
Subject: fyi
this is a poster presentation for Victoria BC National Health Promotion
Conference. I will be there Sunday-Wednesday.
Best wishes,
dennis raphael
(See attached file: victoriatotal.ppt)
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