Explain your poetry and how you write it. Give meaning behind your choice of
words and subjects, what you choose to convey and the style in which you
write with. Give an example, and explain it.
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i'll go first to show what i mean-
I write what I cannot say, and most often use hidden abstract. Hiding what I
really mean behind a different understanding. I can write the poem in any
style, depending on how it wants to be written, but most often it's rhythmic
with my breathe.
example poem:
The Wanting Of Violin (c)copyrighted 1999
Deaf and spent wanting . . . the Violin.
Internally hungry and tangled for those icy strings,
A subdued throbbing remembrance of a sovereign,
Listless in that grip of idle lingering,
It is the embodiment of many offerings.
Purged to a fixation, of wanting the Violin.
A harmonic thread and wind in black beasts’ sympathy,
Used in attribute to bespeak dispels violence,
And in bearing a manifest repugnancy simply,
Having bemoaned its rue wail, the eluded symphony.
Unboundedly sheer, utterance of wanting the Violin.
A celestial frown, swayed within improvised follow
On castrati aria’s consumed low inside compensation,
The taking and devouring of minor out of nothingness,
Is feeling the sonance bring about its absorbency from hollowness.
Dim and starkly in repercussion after the wanting of Violin.
Flowing wickedly into the muddy shallow creeks,
Resounding the symbol of impeccable cohesion,
With its echoic tinkling in wire reeking,
Now submitting gently with humility, aggrievly meeking.
-cliff notes to the above poem:
love, passion, and beethoven's violin sonata
.:~*~:. .:~*~:. .:~*~:. .:~*~:. .:~*~:. .:~*~:. .:~*~:. .:~*~:. .:~*~:.
I was put on this earth to accomplish a certian number of things. Right now
I'm so far behind I'll never die.
Calvin & Hobbes
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