Thanks, Sheila, Doug. Just thinking, maybe the final couplet should be cut.
Bill
On Thu, 12 Jul 2018 at 3:23 am, Sheila Murphy <[log in to unmask]>
wrote:
> Bill, I started to respond last night. So i'll pick up from there! I sense
> the hope here taking us beyond what would be mere lanes.
> There is a lot embedded here, and I like the flow.
>
> Thank you! sheila
>
> On Wed, Jul 11, 2018 at 4:41 AM Bill Wootton <[log in to unmask]>
> wrote:
>
> > Thanks, Patrick. Had a slight re-jig:
> >
> > Wheels whirr
> >
> > in contained channels
> >
> >
> > then close on
> >
> > polystyrene chunks
> >
> >
> >
> > Lightest of leaps,
> >
> > mid-air hang
> >
> >
> > Settlement a lane away
> >
> > before next exuberance
> >
> >
> > Diverse shapes and sizes
> >
> > surge similarly each time
> >
> >
> > Uncommitted to anything
> >
> > but up
> >
> >
> > Breakaway packaging
> >
> > showing the way
> >
> >
> > bw
> >
> > 11.7.16
> >
> > On Wed, 11 Jul 2018 at 8:27 pm, Patrick McManus <
> > [log in to unmask]> wrote:
> >
> > > like dancing polystyrene
> > >
> > > here more aware of diesel death dancing
> > >
> > >
> > > On 11/07/2018 04:20, Bill Wootton wrote:
> > > > Wheel whirr interruption
> > > >
> > > > Cars close on polystyrene bits
> > > >
> > > >
> > > >
> > > > Lightest of leaps,
> > > >
> > > > mid-air hang
> > > >
> > > >
> > > > Settlement a lane away
> > > >
> > > > before next exuberance
> > > >
> > > >
> > > > Random shapes and sizes
> > > >
> > > > Similar surge each time
> > > >
> > > >
> > > > Uncommitted to anything
> > > >
> > > > but up
> > > >
> > > >
> > > > Breakaway packaging
> > > >
> > > > showing the way
> > > >
> > > >
> > > > bw
> > > >
> > > >
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